The feedback that I got the most was to shorten a quote, and to add myself more. I did not add myself to much of the essay and mostly went into details of Konnikova and Chen. For my next draft, I can add experiences to relate myself back to the quotes that I chose. Some things that I saw that I can do in my own essay is also adding my own experiences.

My biggest challenge doing peer review is finding things to comment on. Not doing peer review in high school, it was hard to comment on someone else’s essay. The sheet that was given helped because it told some examples of things that I could do.